Friday, 27 May 2022

THE REDEMPTION (ALMOST) OF PRIVATE JOHN HOOK." [Preview available]

 Episode summary:

"On December 18th 1941, the Imperial Japanese Army invaded the British Crown colony of Hong Kong and with their policy of 'TOTAL WAR' they committed terrible acts of slaughter and rape against British soldiers and civilians. A small band of English soldiers, accompanied by three army nurses escaped into the jungle to rendezvous with an Australian submarine off the coast. A condemned prisoner was also taken with them; Private John Hook. Jericho and his team are dispatched because what John Hook did on that desperate journey, should never have happened!"

Episode may contain the following warnings: 

Alcohol - smoking - strong foul language [including historical language and opinions that are certainly not woke!] - sexual references [including sexual violence and BDSM] - Violence [including torture, combat, domestic and sexual] - references to prostitution, human trafficking, classic slavery and treating women as chattels - Supernatural & paranormal experiences - Horror - Terror induced fear and threats of violence. Reading about historical and past events which have NOT BEEN SANITISED in any way! Oh, and some episodes contain Nazi's; new and old.

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“All incidents and dialogue, and all characters with the exception of some well-known historical figures, are products of the author's imagination and are not to be construed as real. Where real-life historical figures appear, the situations, incidents, and dialogues concerning those persons are entirely fictional and are not intended to depict actual events or to change the entirely fictional nature of the work. In all other respects, any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, events, or locales is entirely coincidental. 

SOME OF THESE EPISODES CONTAIN VERY STRONG LANGUAGE, VIOLENCE, HORROR AND SEXUAL REFERENCES. They are AGE RECOMMENDED suitable for persons aged 12+ years only. Some episodes are rated HIGHER at 15+ and ALL the 'ALEXANDRA' Series versions are AGE RATED at 18+

Stephen Williams
THE AUTHOR.

Author’s notes about this episode:

[1] A little extra warning: This episode contains very strong language and sexual references including serious, multiple sexual assaults.

[2] Sadly, it is actually based – in part – on a true incident. It is historical fact that the Forces of Imperial Japan before and during World War II committed horrendous WAR CRIMES against soldiers and civilians, including the rape of women and girls. This story may be fiction but it is based upon documented facts; for more details, please see this 'WIKIPEDIA' entry HERE.

[3] The original Title for this episode was: ‘HOOKY REDEEMS HIMSELF; WELL, MAYBE.’

[4] A ‘Temporal Detectives’ original story.

[5] "THE REDEMPTION (ALMOST) OF PRIVATE JOHN HOOK.” This episode, was conceived and written by the author. Copyright © 2011-2025 Stephen Williams. No reproduction of any part without written permission. The episode illustration is an original drawing created by the author. It is copyright ©2011 - 2025 Stephen Williams. No reproduction of any part without written permission. 

Episode details:

Concept date: 27th October 2019

First published: unavailable

Status: COMPLETED, BUT UNPUBLISHED.

Location: BOOK SERIES 0 – EPISODE 0.

Revisions: 3 [last revised May 2020]

Version: In review

Published Episode No. 00

Previous episode: NONE.

Next episode: NONE.

Age recommendation: 15+

Average reading time: Approximately 60 Minutes.

Angel-in-charge: James 

Team Assigned: Team 74

Mission: 0 - 159237 - 10 - 1941

Human time:

Gregorian Calendar: MCMXLI
Muslim Calendar: 1359 - 1360 [AH]
Hebrew Calendar: 5701 - 5702
Christian Calendar: 1941AD

Episode Preview:

"THE REDEMPTION (ALMOST) OF PRIVATE JOHN HOOK."

1. THE 'TENNIS CLUB' - A TEMPORARY, MILITARY HOSPITAL – DECEMBER 1941.

 The young nurse ran down the corridor, past the full stretchers of newly arrived wounded and her frantic colleagues, trying to cope with yet another influx of casualties. Nurse Ruth Chambers, newly arrived in Hong Kong, gripped the two small keys in her hand and stopped outside the private room. A hastily written note in chalk declared; 'POW - No Entry.' was hanging from the door. The guard was gone, now probably dead or wounded in the fighting that neared the makeshift hospital. She fumbled with the lock for a few seconds and finally managed to get the damn door open, bursting into the room. "You've got to run for it! The bloody Japanese are coming up the road; they'll be here in minutes."

 Private John Devlin Hook, aged 23 years and under arrest for the apparent murder of his Platoon officer, jumped from the bed and held up his handcuffed wrist; "Sorry darling, i can't go anywhere unless I drag this bloody bed with me!" He shouted and shook his arm violently; the small metal bed rattled and slid across the floor a few inches. John Hook was quite a powerful man, fit from army life and boxing. The nurse didn't say anything but threw John the two keys and ran back out the door. John could now hear gunfire and small explosions; nearby and approaching.

 He realised immediately that the small silver key, next to the door key would fit the handcuffs. he actually chuckled and muttered; "Fucking good on you Ruthie, you fucking came through for old Hooky boy!" The young nurse had been kind to the condemned man, bringing him extra portions of ice cream and paperback books. She had dressed his wounded shoulder and gave him painkillers. 

 "A fucking good decent soul." He said softly; not a bit like him. But there had been several 'good and decent' fuckers in his patrol that 2nd lieutenant Clifford Rees-Davis had abandoned to die, defending the small petrol dump. The bastard had simply ran away and John Hook had gone after him. He shot the cowardly fucker without hesitation and now faced death by hanging. He would have been hung tomorrow morning, but the invading Japanese Army, arriving suddenly, had thwarted that particular little show for the top brass, who John hated.

 John hastily unlocked himself and grabbed up his shirt and small kitbag; then made for the hospital grounds. He ran past abandoned ambulances and blood stained trucks, some still filled with wounded, who shouted at him for help and water. He ignored their pleas and dived into the small monsoon ditch. On his hands and knees, he made his way along the ditch, but stopped suddenly and pulled leaves and bushes down upon himself. He was hardly breathing, as he watched the Japanese officer and about two dozen men, approach the doors of the temporary hospital. They had their bayonets fixed and looked battle weary and a little angry. They had been fighting for years in China and now, they had the bloody British Empire to fight.

 That made John smile a little. That's when he saw the two doctors with a large stick; a white pillow case tied to one end. They were waving it frantically, with their free hands in the air.

They were shot dead where they stood and two Japanese soldiers finished them off with bayonets. John Cussed under his breath and watched the soldiers enter the hospital. He cowed down as more and more shots rang out. He knew there was no fighting British soldiers in there; just patients, doctors, nurses and unarmed medical staff.

 The shooting continued for a couple of minutes; then a really ominous silence came over the place. John eased himself up a little and thought about making a run for it, but three Japanese trucks had turned up with about six or seven soldiers scattered amongst them. John thought the empty trucks would be for prisoners and maybe, the wounded. 

 That's when he saw the two nurses being dragged from the hospital by half a dozen laughing and shouting Japanese soldiers. They ripped the nurse's uniforms off and left the two young women in just their army issue stockings. They were thrown to the ground and the rape party started. The screaming and sobbing made John clench and unclench his fists and curse repeatedly.

 Each girl was brutally, raped, punched and slapped by maybe six or seven men. The other men had formed a loose circle about the girls; passing sake bottles amongst themselves and several were masturbating; getting ready for their turn. After several minutes there was a terrible silence form the women. To John; that was worse than the screaming. The young officer stood laughing, hands on hips, watching. When the soldiers had finished, two of the men pissed over the prostrate women; giggling loudly and slapping each other. The two girls were hauled up and thrown into the back of a truck; John could see little puddles of blood upon the gravel driveway.

 He watched, filled with useless and helpless anger, as another two young nurses were dragged out and the whole dreadful scene was repeated. Except one young woman tried to escape. She somehow managed to throw off the two soldiers who ere holding her down for their colleagues to violate. She ran a few yards before being shot dead. A soldier ran up to the body and kicked it violently, then pulled his bayonet from his rifle and stabbed and chopped at the body for a few minutes. The other nurse, screaming hysterically was raped by nearly a dozen men and thrown, still and almost lifeless into the back of the truck, with her two friends. 

 Another two women were dragged out and yet again, brutally raped and beaten before John's eyes, which were now filled with tears. He wasn't an emotional man by any means [except anger maybe] but the sights before him placed a large rock in his stomach and throat.

 This went on until nightfall; two girls each time including the grim faced Sister, who the officer took first. Punching her and shouting, as he sodomised her in front of the other sobbing nurse and his cheering soldiers. After their ordeal, both women were thrown upon the truck with the other girls. When they had no new girls to rape, the Japanese and their trucks pulled away, with the bruised and battered nurses aboard and only about half a dozen soldiers remained to guard the silent buildings.

 John lay in the ditch, head in hands, and slowly realised that he had not seen young 'Ruthie' amongst the violated women. He knew he had to find out about her; even if it caused more pain and anguish to him. He resolved to check out the hospital under the cover of darkness. But first he needed a weapon. One Japanese soldier - probably a corporal - was drinking sake by the large ornamental flower pots, near the hospital's side door. What caught John's eye was his pistol holster and belt. 

 John flexed his fingers and quietly removed his leather belt. He made his way to the unsuspecting soldier, crawling on his belly. He was that close to the soldier that he could hear the man chuckling to himself. He had no idea that John Hook was behind him. John flexed his belt and struck. The soldier took about a minute to die, thrashing about and struggling in the gravel in almost silence. The belt had prevented any shouts for help as John strangled him. John pulled the body behind the pots and stripped it of anything useful - especially the pistol - then noticed the specks of blood around the soldier’s crotch. He grunted with satisfaction; "Hope you enjoyed those poor bitches my friend. You won't fuck anyone else." He muttered to himself and disappeared into the side door of the tennis Club, turned hospital. 

 There were bodies everywhere; on stretchers and in beds. The soldiers of Imperial Japan had butchered the sick and wounded with bullets and bayonets. He passed a young native nurse sprawled across a dead Australian soldier in his bed. She had clearly tried to protect the man and had been savagely bayoneted to death.

 John just shook his head and crept down the corridor and suddenly realised he could hear faint crying in the dark. With moonlight streaming through the windows, he could just make out the sign on the door; it was the morgue. 

 He quietly and slowly pushed on the door and crept in. In the far corner were huddled three nurses; all crying softly. To his immense relief, one was 'Ruthie'. She simply stared at John and then ran across the floor on her hands and knees; grabbing his legs. He ran his fingers through her long dark hair and whispered; "Your safe now, but we need to get the bloody hell out of here!"

 The three young nurses had actually hid in the morgue drawers, along with cold dead bodies, as the soldiers searched the hospital. Lt. Ruth Chambers had managed to compose herself and her calm, had helped the other two nurses, to deal with the terrible situation they found themselves in. Lt. Patricia [Big Pat] Collins and Lt. Dawn Baines both gripped John by the shoulder and hand. He could see the look of utter terror and fear upon their faces. They had seen what happened to their colleagues; through the small morgue window. 

 Dawn gripped his hand and whispered; "You will use that on me, if we're about to be captured by...by those...by those animals." She gestured to his pistol. John just nodded and told the women to follow him. Making for the dark jungle, they stopped and watched the Japanese soldiers set fire to the hospital; they wanted to hide their evil deeds and fire could do that.

 The little group managed to avoid the many Japanese troops that were patrolling the small road that lead up towards the mountains, thanks to John's skill in the jungle. By a derelict school they came upon a British Patrol; also trying to make the mountain road. John could not believe his bad luck; they were from his old Regiment and the young Captain certainly knew who he was.

"THE REDEMPTION (ALMOST) OF PRIVATE JOHN HOOK."  CONTINUES IN 'TEMPORAL DETECTIVES' BOOK SERIES 0 [EPISODE 0.]

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